:)

hanya menemukan pilhan kata menarik sewaktu pulang

to be notice is okay, but its not sure whether you are felt or not
while
the life said
we must make life felt us to the right point
and don't be a pointless with

kinda agree with Maya Angelou quotation that sounding like this :

“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”